"We do not inherit the Earth from our ancestors, we borrow it from our children". This quote holds a very true sense in today's world. The earth is already suffering from numerous problems and one such relates to garbage disposal. Garbage and other waste materials has become a serious problem in the world today. In this essay, I am going to examine the possible reasons for this and suggest some of the proactive measures.
Demands of people are rising day by day. No sooner one need is satisfied, other rises. To cope up with multiplying demands, more and more industries are being established. These industries release a major proportion of chemicals into rivers. Moreover, these chemicals not only contaminate water bodies but also harm the aquatic life. According to a report published in Nature journal, industries in India produce about 62 million tonnes of solid-waste annually, which are left untreated and is not properly disposed. Its recycling is possible, but there is no proper system to deposit it. However, this problem can be puzzle out by installing waste management plants.
Another possible reason is changing trends of the society. Increase in income level of people makes them more materialistic. In this mass consumption society where people use more and throw away more than ever before. Moreover, countries are running out of space to store garbage and waste materials. The best epitome of this is India, where 70 percent of the population, annually, throw away the items which can still be put in use. To solve this intractable problem, every citizen needs to participate in producing less garbage. Moreover, the system named three R' s can also be proved beneficial. Here, three R' s means reduce, recycle, and reduce. If people will follow this, the problem will be definitely solved.
In conclusion, there is an increase in the number of garbage and waste materials as people are not aware of the consequences of this. Government should play a major role in educating people about how to reduce the problem. Moreover, companies should make products to be able to recycle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, still, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1764.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06896551724 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71387927246 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609195402299 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7330701363 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.56 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.92 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.32 7.06120827912 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216486616414 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543313136727 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504220312118 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131069177209 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593999851485 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.53 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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