Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Global tourism, an important industry to enhance the economy of all countries, is an area of grave concern. It is believed that it rises the conflict among different nations more that melting the culture in each other. I partially agree to some extend with this, but more understanding between millions of individuals is measured.
Tourism rate is fluctuating and getting tremendously increased on some certain months of the year or with any special event in any country. High rate of tourism leads to many conflicts between the inhabitants and foreigners who are easily can be ripped off. When people travel to other countries for example a leisure, they change the country`s living cost during their period of stay. For instance, the rental and living stuff cost became extortionate during the football world cup in Brazil. Many land lords increased their properties cost either to tourists or native people; therefore, some inhabitants become so offensive to any foreigner.
However, it is undeniable that tourism is one of the main important tool for any country to distribute its culture to other countries, it is also promoting people to understand and accept the differences between nations. Some nations accepted a new culture to be existed in their countries. For example, the Christmas is celebrated only in the west countries; however, some countries in the far east celebrate it where in China. Such move defuses the tension and reduce the difference between several countries. Moreover, experiencing new food will improve any diversity of food at same country. Such as the several restaurants of Arabic cousins where located in the middle of Germany.
To conclude, Although there are drawbacks from the tourism, we can not forget its positive impacts not only in nation, but also globally for country`s economy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'extent' ("extent" is a noun, "extend" is a verb)?
Suggestion: extent
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28571428571 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83099469842 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595238095238 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9808358778 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.6 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53333333333 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144124105151 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048151528498 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473593668005 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0901930465142 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318420739116 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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