Is it important to keep your old friends than making new friends?
Friends are as important as family. We have spent most of our time with some of them. Obviously, unacceptable friends would not last for a long time. therefore, two or three friends that we still have are the best. Various points of view which are germane to the matter being discussed brings us to the moot question as to whether we should keep our old friends or not. Some people have a disposition toward the notion that making new friend can bring new joys to the life. yet the popular sentiment to which I vehemently cling is that people should keep their old friends. The underlying aim of this essay is to put forward some cogent reasons to shed light on a number of issues in this framework.
The first focal point that prompts me to hold this idea is that old friends have spent most of their life together and this history that they have made, help them to have a depth understanding about each other. The acquaintance consists of different part of life, includes behavior, families and financial situation. consequently, an old friendship helps us to reveal our problems easily. For a new friend, at first we should provide an introduction to the situation, hopefully, if he understands, we would not sure that the solution he gave is sensible. As a personal experience, my old friend was not available for a while. During the time, I faced a complicated situation with my fiance. Alternatively, I called one of the new ones and described him. After two hours of monologue, he came up with an unbelievable and funny solution. I thought he is trying to make a joke with the suggestion, but then I found out that he truly believed it.
Another equally salient point in corroborating my stance on this subject is that old friend is reliable. A trust would not be achieved unless the time passed. Old friends share all the valuable things and know that other one wouldn’t betray him/her anyway. This consists of Not only material but also, moral things. There were times in any one's life that his secrets were revealed by one of his friends. As a result, it merely brings embarrassment and exclusively angriness toward the person that said it to the others. One of my relative's secret keeper was his new friend. My cousin did a wrong thing in the past and told it to him. His future was affected by this. One day when she came home, he recognized that his wife knows everything. Unfortunately, revealed secret did lead them to separation.
It can be de deduced from a combination of breadth of coverage and depth of detail that old friends are one of the most precious things in the life and I believe that we should keep them
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Therefore
...friends would not last for a long time. therefore, two or three friends that we still hav...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...two or three friends that we still have are the best. Various points of view which ...
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Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...iscussed brings us to the moot question as to whether we should keep our old friends or not. ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yet
... friend can bring new joys to the life. yet the popular sentiment to which I veheme...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...a depth understanding about each other. The acquaintance consists of different part...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Consequently
...vior, families and financial situation. consequently, an old friendship helps us to reveal o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, consequently, first, if, so, still, then, therefore, while, as to, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 73.0 43.0788530466 169% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2173.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 469.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63326226013 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65364457471 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67039502472 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533049040512 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 666.9 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.1583650162 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.9310344828 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1724137931 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.34482758621 5.45110844103 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290064846367 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786040488352 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0919873076536 0.0737576698707 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189532939685 0.150856017488 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0743730255045 0.0645574589148 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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