He born 5 February 1985 is a Portuguese professional footballer who plays as a forward for Spanish club Real Madrid and the Portugal national team.
By and large, the contemporary age is no strange to the notion of friendships and its importance in such a competitive world. Without having some stunning friends, it depends on chance or exceptional talents of people that they can make some obvious improvements. In this regard, some people argue that keeping to live in one place and maintaining friendships with the same people is of greater importance, as compared with the case when we relocate, while others take issue with this viewpoint. Notwithstanding differences, in my view, moving to newer place during the time can permit us to face some great occasions. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, by moving to a new city or country, we can be provided with more opportunities to make further money in comparison with the time when we would live in the former place. Money is the basic requirement for life without which one cannot imagine a peaceful and healthy lifestyle. In the modern time, where the growth of civilization is going too fast and following the western culture, we need even more money to handle our day to day life. Going to a new place, we can confront with much better chances to make some remarkable money, including finding a job in a wealthy company, sharing money with someone else, and investing in a great construction project.
Secondly, based on my observations, with going to a new place, we can learn to communicate better with others, thus increasing the possibility of finding new golden opportunities in the not-so-distant future. If one is going to improve his or her bottom lines, such as impressing others by our objectives, training to improve our communication skills is the best place to start. In order to ensure that you are able to convey your message effectively, you need to communicate properly with the other person. If you are not capable of communicating your message clear as well as loud to the other individual, he/ she will not be able to perceive the true meaning as well as a motive behind your message. Moving to a new place can allow us to exploit new chances to communicate better with other people, such as our instructors, managers, and friends.
All in all, as mentioned above, moving to a newer place can allow us to make more money and to communicate better with others. In spite of that, both moving to a new place and remaining in a place for a long time have some pros and cons. To choose one over another would be a personal preference based on the one’s needs, ambitions, and desires.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 304, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'keeping living'.
Suggestion: keeping living
... In this regard, some people argue that keeping to live in one place and maintaining friendship...
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Line 5, column 316, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'improving'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'train' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: improving
...sing others by our objectives, training to improve our communication skills is the best pl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, i feel, such as, as well as, by and large, in my view, in spite of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 75.0 52.1666666667 144% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2143.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 449.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7728285078 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83277653438 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498886414254 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 688.5 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.8435874794 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.058823529 100.406767564 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4117647059 20.6045352989 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41176470588 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0155324378164 0.236089414692 7% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00724501834276 0.076458572812 9% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0132615425382 0.0737576698707 18% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0113145677877 0.150856017488 8% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00281245668212 0.0645574589148 4% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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