Write a letter to a friend.you have borrowed something from and it get damaged.
1) Apologize for damaging the product
2) Explain what happened
3) Say how are you going to fix the issues.
Dear John,
I hope you and your family are well! I`m writing to let you know that the kitchen appliance which I borrowed from you got damaged last week while using it.
The item is a blender which you have just bought during your last trip in United Kingdom, and it was a brand-new device from a reputable make. When I borrowed it, I tried to use it once and it damaged due to my wrong usage. Please accept my apologies for the unwanted current situation.
I tried to switch the mixer ON after connecting it to the power supply, but it did not work at all. The instruction manual of the blender states that power supply should be connected only to 230 Voltage though a special adaptor; however, I connected it directly to a higher power supply which is 415 Voltage. This is the reason why the blender`s motor got burnt out.
I have cash voucher from one shop where in the city center, and it sells appliances including the kitchen items which are made by a reputable manufacturer. The cash voucher can cover the full cost of one new blender. Therefore, please accept it to buy a new device instead of the faulty blender.
Seeing you soon,
Ayoub
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, therefore, well, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 968.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60952380952 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4323033884 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614285714286 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5584832925 44.8134815571 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0909090909 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 4.34317383033 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161242522445 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571722116658 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668658492205 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102640795698 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0928715495867 0.0580467560999 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.