There is no denying the fact that friendship and communication are a vital part of anyone's life. Some may have a few friends while there are people who might have more than twenty or so. What that is of great importance in friendship, is honesty. Honesty is the pillar of friendship and intimacy among friends. No one can bear befriending a two-faced or a deceitful person. What that is a matter of debate is whether it is possible to be always completely honest with friends. Some are of the opinion that this is impossible or at least is not feasible. In my opinion, it is very crucial to be always honest with friends because we expect the same thing from them. However, I-for one-subscribe to the idea that being honest in any condition is possible. Hereunder I elaborate my reasons about this argument.
First of all, I think although in some situations it may seem difficult to be honest with a friend, we can manage it. For instance a friend asks our opinion about a dress she has recently bought; I may not like her dress at all, I have two options: I can either say it is really beautiful and suites her or say that my style and taste differs from hers and cannot give a fair opinion about the dress. Generally speaking, in many occasions such the aforementioned situations, we can simply eschew answering some questions or facts and explain our ideas in a persuasive manner that does not hurt a friends feelings.
Alongside with above reason, sometimes we face the dilemma about saying some facts to our friends that we wish to remain covert. One cannot disclose everything about one's life even to best friends. Yet if we are not honest, we may pay the price later in that relationship. In this case one can easily explain to one's friend that he or she is not willing to talk about this and does not intend to be disrespectful and dishonest towards one's friend. To give and illustration of this, I explain my own experience. A friend once asked me how much money we borrowed from relatives for buying our house. I did not like to lie at all, so I faced it and explained my feelings about her question to her and do not want to disclose the amount of money we borrowed for some reasons. She decently accepted my idea and thanked me for my honesty.
To conclude, I believe that honesty plays an important role in people's relationship with each other. It is the top priority especially in friendships. One who is not honest with friends does not have peace of mind. I think we can always remain honest with our friends even in situations where honesty seems impossible. In case we encounter the conditions that a friend asks us about some undesired facts, we can give explanation that this facts should not be revealed. All in all, I am of the opinion that although honesty seems difficult, it is possible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, really, so, while, at least, for instance, i think, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 77.0 43.0788530466 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2329.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 506.0 407.700716846 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60276679842 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7428307748 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63337900162 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47233201581 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 731.7 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2167707716 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2592592593 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7407407407 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85185185185 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205255812732 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632265636667 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753776520171 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150172277622 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548985226892 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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