Nowadays, many countries face the issues of brain drain. The phenomenon has affected most of the countries across the world. It can be called as a global talent exchange. Some assert that it is a modern day theft, others feel differently. The essay will deal with both the perspectives.
On the one hand, the globalization is affecting the public in every walk of life from their personal life to professional life. People in search of better opportunities and lifestyle are heading abroad. In addition, everyone likes to take on a new challenge in life as a monotonous life does no good. Life is all about moving forward and knowing one’s value. Further, many countries do not have enough job opportunities available to cater to the demands of public. However, in some cases when the talent is not recognized in their parent country the people choose to move abroad. Thus, it can be said that people are willingly moving away from their countries to be able to live a life of good standard with a good level of job satisfaction and are not being snatched away from their place of residence.
On the other hand, there are a group of people who are solely inclined to move abroad to a new country irrespective of the level of education and reasons. People often move from rich countries to poor countries and vice-versa. Nothing is strange about that as it has been happening over the course of history. As a being we have always been in motion from one place to another. Therefore, the motion of population will continue in pursuit of something that attracts them.
In conclusion, in my opinion, nobody is coercing anyone to act on things which are against their wishes. The movement will continue to meet the needs and demands of their own self. In fact, in the coming future with more openness the activity will be more rampant.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'groups'?
Suggestion: groups
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...n happening over the course of history. As a being we have always been in motion f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, thus, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.771875 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63233907094 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528125 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.3463443201 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.35 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241856047822 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676872444559 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0889452911419 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132827643797 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669652077057 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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