Dear Igor,
I hope the letter reaches you in the best of health. I am writing to you to inform you about moving in a new apartment in Downtown Toronto. Allow me to elaborate.
As you know, I and Sasha had been trying for most of the time to find a decent apartment to start our family. However, all the efforts were turning out to be futile. But, we landed an apartment on Young Street last week. In addition, we have terminated the lease of the basement which we called our home till last week.
Furthermore, you would be happy to know about the new house. It was built up recently and thrown open for public leases two weeks ago. It has two bedroom and a lovely lake side facing balcony. It finally feels like home and we are aware that this is only a drop in the ocean and now we have to return back to the drawing board to get our jobs sorted.
We are throwing a small dinner party for house warming on Saturday and you are invited for the same.
I can’t wait to see you.
Yours sincerely,
Brad Jason
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 194, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... and a lovely lake side facing balcony. It finally feels like home and we are awar...
^^
Line 7, column 295, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'return'.
Suggestion: return
... a drop in the ocean and now we have to return back to the drawing board to get our jobs so...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, furthermore, however, so, in addition, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 840.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32989690722 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17061115095 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654639175258 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3957220983 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.0 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8571428571 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35714285714 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225307361784 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726879864875 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699422985082 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129729400954 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667628388634 0.0580467560999 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.9 8.37731958763 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.24 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.