Transportation has developed over years. We started to use horses and camels for transportation. Nowadays, we use cars, trains, and airplanes. I think in next twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today. I feel this way because the technology is developing and cars will not satisfy people.
To begin with, advanced technology will diminished the cars in next few years. This is mainly because the companies want to be rich. They built different styles for peoples' need. In recent few years, someone wanted a car to commute and travel without taking into consideration the technology on cars. Nowadays, it is different because a lot of people are looking for the technology such as GPS, leather seats, Air condition, and advanced sound system. Not only the features, but also the car consumption of oil. Also, some people likes to buy electric cars because it is saver in term of money for long run. As you can see with time, the needs for people is changed. I am sure within few years our cars will fly and we will have air streets because of the advanced technology.
Secondly, people are not satisfy with the cars nowadays. A lot of people wants to buy the new trendy cars to show off. Someone who has 2014 car it means for others it is old. So, he or she will buy a new car in order to meet the demand of others. A good example is celebrities. I follow different actors on Snap chat. I see that everyone has at least three cars and every year they change them. So, companies will create new kind of transportation for this type of people who buy the new things in order to meet the demands of others. As a result in the near future, the companies will produce different types of transportation.
To conclude, the cars in the next few years will declined because the companies will produce new types of transportation to meet the demands as well as to satisfy people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 41, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'diminish'
Suggestion: diminish
...To begin with, advanced technology will diminished the cars in next few years. This is mai...
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Line 7, column 50, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'decline'
Suggestion: decline
...de, the cars in the next few years will declined because the companies will produce new ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, as to, at least, i feel, i think, kind of, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 341.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57771260997 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59518696804 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486803519062 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.9 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2218281335 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.0416666667 100.406767564 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2083333333 20.6045352989 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.79166666667 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178976433935 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060082355525 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700002039522 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127587914746 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493502202321 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 11.7677419355 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.69 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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