You wish to apply for a position with a company in your city. Write a letter to the manager of this company and include the following information:
– your educational background
– your work experience
– other information that makes you an ideal candidate for the position
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to express my interest for the job opportunity in your organization. I am a Bachelors in Finance and an MBA in Human Resource from Middlesex University. I came across your job advertisement for the vacancy of Senior Human Resource Manager in the classified section of Gulf news.
With regards to my professional experience, I have overall five years of full time work experience as a Human Resource Manager in a renowned Oil & Gas company. Apart from handling HR, I also have worked as an Administration Manager as well as served as a Secretary to the CEO.
Since, my forte is in talent acquisition, employee verification and payrolls, my candidature will be an ultimate match to your requirement. Also, I would like to highlight my multi-tasking skills, proactive behaviour, accuracy in work and my hardworking attitude towards work.
I am keen to join your organization. Looking forward to your positive response.
Yours faithfully,
Jessica Ayri
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 88, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a bachelor' or simply 'Bachelors'?
Suggestion: a bachelor; Bachelors
... opportunity in your organization. I am a Bachelors in Finance and an MBA in Human Resource...
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Line 3, column 167, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...man Resource from Middlesex University. I came across your job advertisement for ...
^
Line 5, column 74, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...xperience, I have overall five years of full time work experience as a Human Resource Man...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, well, apart from, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 841.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2893081761 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29388045282 2.54303337028 130% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647798742138 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9555457252 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226250140359 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0988836840441 0.0766984524023 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447427579268 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13343558351 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468130210932 0.0580467560999 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 70.7449484536 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 8.71597938144 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 7.59969072165 124% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.