There is a practice of voting in democratic countries in which public elect their representatives to serve them. It is suggested by many that casting vote should be mandatory for everyone. In my opinion, I agree with this notion and this essay will explain why making this compulsory will increase the rate of decision making and it will strengthen the democratic values.
At the outset, in many countries authorities don't take decision early because they feel they do not have e everyone's viewpoint on a particular issue which could cause uproar if the decision is made and this lead decision making slow. Moreover, in some countries like India, there is widespread apathy in electorate for elections. To cite an example, Australia has made voting compulsory which has increased the solution rates in the country. Therefore, making voting compulsory will have great impact on governance.
Furthermore, democratic system will only flourish if people will participate in the process. By adding more people in the process, democracy will become more powerful and people will become empowered. For example, countries such as India, USA where democracy is practiced, people have more freedom of expression and there is less abuse of power. People joining the electoral process will only safeguard the democratic value system.
In conclusion, this essay analysed why electoral process must be made mandatory for everyone because this will resolve issues by quickly and make the roots of democracy stronger.
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... of democracy stronger which will allows people to exercise their freedom.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, then, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24905660377 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64146630693 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539622641509 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5461954708 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.916666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146593022037 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071753529842 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527824476404 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100197344275 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0760789013391 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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