Although the development of economy and technology have grown rapidly, the subsequent problem are environmental pollution,. The result of this global warming pollution caused by transportation, agriculture and industry.
It is true global warming has became a hot issue in environmental problem, which can cause a series negative effect on surroundings. First of all, global warming makes temperature in atmosphere and water rise gradually due to burning fossil fuels, for instance, oil, gas, coal and so on. So the speed at which ice and snow melt is much faster than before,which can result in sea levels rising sharp. Therefore a lot of human and animal territory will be immersed by water. After that they have to move to other place to live. In addition, the increased temperature may cause soil become dry, then a great number of planets will die. Consequently, people will be faced with gradual increase price of commodities and extreme hot weather.
Obviously, taking measures to slow and reduce the global warming is an important and urgent task. The first key step is cut down the amount of carbon emissions by reducing fossil fuels consumption. For example, taking public transportation instead of driving your own car, saving electricity and recycling renewable materials. Moreover working on renewable energy sources, including solar, wind, biological and nuclear energy is an awesome solution. Because the renewable resources are less dirty than fossil fuels. Even if, we could research how to improve the efficiency rate of using fuel.
To sum it all up, people should be responsible for homeland and their offspring. So don’t hesitate to take actions to protect our environment to reduce global warming.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35766423358 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88704355917 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.686131386861 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.6769927849 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.3529411765 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1176470588 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35294117647 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2249702226 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620856922936 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620924185324 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138281808742 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498420477163 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.