Technology has become more advance if you compare it with our ancient periods when people had no means to travel except their feet. Some people believe that car will be the best transportation to travel around whereas other believes that bicycle is the best way to travel as well as mainatining a fit body. This essay will have arguments on both statements and finally will state my choice of travelling around the city.
On one hand, critics may point out that one of the most significant benefits of travelling by car is that you can reach to the destined place on time. For example, people, unlike in the past, now have various vehicle like car and motorcycle, as an easy way to reach their detination without any hardship, thanks to modern technologies. Also, you can travel with your family as cars are more spacious than any other vehicles.
On the other hand, there are number of arguments in favour of my stance. One of the most important one is that, riding a bicycle will keep you fit and healthy as it is a good medium for exercise as you will be using your feets to move around. Firstly, it will help to maintain your blood circulation and also your blood pressure will be under control with the physical involvement while cycling. According to "Times Magazine December 2017 edition", the proportion of heart disease and obesity has been decreased from 30% to 10% among people who use bicycle as their means of tranportation. Secondly, it will be beneficial for our environment because bicycle does not need any sort of fuels to run compare to cars.
Lastly, in my opinion, the government of Australia is taking great initaive in educating their citizen to ride bicycle more than vehicle if possible to improve their health as well as manage the eco-system.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that despite of having some demerits, the advantages of riding a bicycle are indeed too dire to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Lastly, in my opinion, the government of Australia is taking great initaive in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, while, for example, sort of, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83630952381 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60799718281 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.8287755391 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8461538462 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1538461538 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246029412407 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0842044538399 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0905523120138 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124032832241 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0790901097559 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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