when there is a new technological device is available, some people will buy it immediately, while others would wait until many others have adopted it. Which view do you agree more?
In the digital days, technology is developing rapidly and a variety of tech gears emerge quickly every day. For some people, they would like to buy the new products as soon as they are available. However, I agree more with the people who wait for a while until other people adopt them.
The first concern to wait and buy the new technological device is the economic issue. If we buy the new device later, we can save enormous money. It is a common sense that the new technological device is extraordinarily expensive when it is first brought to the public attention, but its price will plunge a lot after short while when it comes out. Let's say when the iphone 4S first was available to the public, the price of one phone is around 5000 RMB in China. But just after a few months, the price is much lower, only approximately 4000 RMB. And now after several generations of iphone, you can buy an iphone 4S with just 2000 RMB. So, waiting a while after the new device is available will save a lot of money for the people who are not very rich but still want to try the technological device. What's more, the quality of the device will not decrease as the time pass by.
And there is another advantage to buy later after the devices come out. When a lot of people have adopted the technological device, there will be a wide range of experiences for you to use the electronic gadgets. If you buy it later and find some problems or questions with the device, you can just search on the internet. And there will be some people who have already asked that question, and the answer is just right there, brought to our fingertips. However, if you buy the device too early, you may not take the advantage of that experience.
Chances are that some die-hard fan for electronic gadgets may want to keep up with the newest products, and buying the technological device as soon as it is available can bring more fun, satisfaction and challenge to them when discovering the wonderful power of the devices. However, for the common people who are not zealots of those technological gears, the fun of using them quickly doesn't come close to the money they save and the convenience of experience that other people who adopted the machines have offered. In the meantime, even if you buy later, you will not lose any of the quality and property of the new technological devices.
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- when there is a new technological device is available, some people will buy it immediately, while others would wait until many others have adopted it. Which view do you agree more? 73
- when there is a new technological device is available, some people will buy it immediately, while others would wait until many others have adopted it. Which view do you agree more? 66
- when there is a new technological device is available, some people will buy it immediately, while others would wait until many others have adopted it. Which view do you agree more? 73
- when there is a new technological device is available, some people will buy it immediately, while others would wait until many others have adopted it. Which view do you agree more? 73
- when there is a new technological device is available, some people will buy it immediately, while others would wait until many others have adopted it. Which view do you agree more? 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1941.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 426.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55633802817 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52790309019 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.455399061033 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 627.3 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2831331259 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.157894737 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4210526316 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42105263158 5.45110844103 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.402548188543 0.236089414692 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124069698643 0.076458572812 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741885145676 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254112592953 0.150856017488 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030371770673 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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