In the lecture, the professor makes a series of points that cast doubt on all the arguments presented in the article.She states, it could be quite possible that bees were present 200 million years ago and the arguments are not convincing.
First of all, the speaker points out that it is true that there is no real bees fossils from that time. But the reason for not finding any bee fossil from 200 million years ago is the fact that bees only could preserved on tree resin which was rare at that time. So the fact that there was no fossils remained from that time is due to the fact that no trees could produce resins to make the fossil.
Also, the professor believes absence of flowering plants is not convincing reason. She states it is possible bees before flowering plants were feeding on non flowering plants like fern and pine trees and then after presence of flowering plants then adapted to feed on them due to evolution.
Lastly, the lecturer says absence of spiral caps is not supporting the fact that bees were not made them. She states bees build the chambers due to being waterproof which other insect can not make them
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 118, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: She
... the arguments presented in the article.She states, it could be quite possible that...
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Line 2, column 179, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...bee fossil from 200 million years ago is the fact that bees only could preserved...
^^
Line 2, column 210, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rs ago is the fact that bees only could preserved on tree resin which was rare a...
^^
Line 2, column 212, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'preserve'
Suggestion: preserve
... ago is the fact that bees only could preserved on tree resin which was rare at that ti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, lastly, so, then, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 30.3222958057 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 935.0 1373.03311258 68% => OK
No of words: 204.0 270.72406181 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58333333333 5.08290768461 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 4.04702891845 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17900289885 2.5805825403 84% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 145.348785872 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53431372549 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 419.366225166 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.55342163355 84% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0662251656 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0305041933 49.2860985944 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.875 110.228320801 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 21.698381199 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06452816374 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210132007287 0.272083759551 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0933089300485 0.0996497079465 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747803070192 0.0662205650399 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116475327443 0.162205337803 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663740787696 0.0443174109184 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.3589403974 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 53.8541721854 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 12.2367328918 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.42419426049 89% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 63.6247240618 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.7273730684 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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