Foreign tourists must be charged higher fees than local people to visit the cultural places and historical sites. Do you agree or disagree with this statement. Give your own opinion including relevant examples.
The charges associated with the visit to tourist places are always a contestation for any country. Many thinks foreign tourists are levied to pay higher charges than local people. However, I discord with this statement and this essay intends to analyse various aspects along with supporting examples in this debatable issue.
To embark upon, with the foreign tourist any country generate most income than any other sector. Also, foreign traveller visits any country once in a lifetime so they do not have any option to pay extra and visit historical places, parks etc. For instance, to visit Tajmahal in India for foreign holidaymaker the costing is way high than native people but as this one of the wonder in the world popularity is not getting decreased and foreign has to pay the amount to see the place. Instead on this country can do the pricing strategy same for everyone which encourage non-natives too to visit the attraction.
Secondly, the importance’s of the heritage get spread overseas with the help of mouth of word. If foreign liked the place they refer their friends and family which ultimately resultant the increase tourism. By lowering price amount for both local and non-native uplift the regional business. For illustrative, foreign who all the visiting at the time of Durga Puja to Kolkata increase the sale on local food, traditional clothes etc. generate the huge revenue to the community market.
To recapitulate, government should keep the price same to international delegates too to get the good impression about any country because this will help to boost the tourism and economic growth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Instead,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, secondly, so, as to, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14661654135 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66461805579 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605263157895 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5677712312 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.307692308 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245996810817 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873422382609 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602005223568 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143789591315 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0988014930385 0.056905535591 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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