Imprisonment is controversial topic and each individual have different opinion on it. Few people believe that there should be no concept to prison for any kind of crime , however, a group of people advise a better alternative to give the punishment of the crime like, criminals have to work without any wages so that it will helps to the society. As far I am concerned, I strongly advocate to unpaid tasks instead of putting some one to the jail for his or her crime. In this essay I will highlight the points about mentioned topic.
Firstly, Every country has own laws and every citizen comes under it. Few countries are tremendously stick law for a minor crime one could be put behind the bars for several years. As this could not be the right decision to mould someone, it have many side-effects for an instance, if someone kept into the jail for many years that person will spend most of the time with the criminal and as it is well know fact that atomsphere influence our mind. To surrounded around the criminals could lead someone to become fear-free to commit crime in future.
On the other hand, If we deal criminal with a polite and diplomatic ways this will not only help to person who found guilty. For example, In School if any student did not perform properly teachers punished the student in a very useful manner, like in Indian school if any student did not perform properly ,teachers treat them in a different ways, few students were instructed to clean floor and washrooms. They found this method of punishment is far better than giving them physical punishment.
Same technique should be implemented to the criminal as if they will work for free of cost chances will be high that they can understand how to respect others and make or world more happy place to like.
To conclude, It is fact that we can not change someone forcefully, perhaps if we crate the system in such a way that it will not only change the mind set of criminal also help our soceity . Thus I personally feel that there should not be physical punishment for any kind of crime.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, so, thus, well, for example, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1705.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 369.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62059620596 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46676236356 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552845528455 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.7621057019 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.785714286 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3571428571 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197150837356 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636734782788 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580658727648 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110820880837 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433450359626 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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