Essay topics:
Acident
I wonder how many accidents I’ve had in my life. I’ve had a few serious ones where I’ve ended up in hospital. Traffic accidents are the worst. They’re always painful. I haven’t had too many accidents related work. I suppose It’s because I do office work and it's not so dangerous. Almost my accidents are around house. I’ve lost count of the number of times I’ve hit my thumb by hammer. I’m also good at standing up and hitting my head on something. I’m not as bad as my friend though. He’s a real accident looking to a somewhere happen. Almost time we meet, he has a few story to tell his accident latest. He’s really unbelievable. I think I will very worry if I were his mother.
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Thank you very much! I will
Thank you very much! I will try that
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 495, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ng up and hitting my head on something. I'm not as bad as my friend though. He&ap...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 599, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nt looking to a somewhere happen. Almost time we meet, he has a few story to tell...
^^
Line 1, column 624, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun story seems to be countable; consider using: 'few stories'.
Suggestion: few stories
... happen. Almost time we meet, he has a few story to tell his accident latest. He's ...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, really, so, i suppose, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 41.998997996 29% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 612.0 1615.20841683 38% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 128.0 315.596192385 41% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78125 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.36358566101 4.20363070211 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82825448599 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 176.041082164 51% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.703125 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 193.5 506.74238477 38% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 9.0 20.2975951904 44% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 16.1663861397 49.4020404114 33% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 43.7142857143 106.682146367 41% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 9.14285714286 20.7667163134 44% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.244688304435 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.084324248473 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151304729494 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 13.0946893788 44% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.8 50.2224549098 141% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 11.3001002004 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.67 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 78.4519038076 33% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 3.5 9.78957915832 36% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 5.6 10.1190380762 55% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 6.0 10.7795591182 56% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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