Dear Sir,
I am Satpreet Singh, Staying in the final year student hostel building, and my room number B101. I am writing to highlight a concern about my room.
The Room allotted to me is double occupancy, my roommate is from north India, and he always listen music with enormously high volume, which creates the problem for me and the students who are staying nearby my room. We have already reported this issue to hostel warden, however, so far no action has been taken place by the warden. I requested my roommate to use headphones instead of speakers, but he refused to understand.
Because of this reason, I am not able to sleep properly at night, and final exams are already scheduled for upcoming month.
I am afraid, that if this will continue, it can affect my final result.
So, I urge you to please change my room and take appropriate action to overcome this issue, as many other students are facing the same problem.
Your Sincerely,
Satpreet Singh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 93, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'listens'.
Suggestion: listens
...mate is from north India, and he always listen music with enormously high volume, whic...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 801.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73964497041 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.447916908 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.692307692308 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4215211707 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143763854666 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514185919501 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528079383317 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0775715859467 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540317032458 0.0580467560999 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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