You are taking a holiday in a place recommended by your local travel agent, and you are having a wonderfull time. You promised to write to him and let him know what you think of his suggestion.
Write a letter to you travel agent as promised, and let him know what you have been doing and what you are giong to do before the end of your holiday.
Explain why you think he made the right choice for you.
Dear sir,
I am writing this letter to express my profound gratitude for giving me a helpful suggestion form my holiday. I am having wonderful time here and I appreciate your choice on that.
well, as you recommended , I am visiting the cultural and traditional heritage of India.I visited Tajmahal and came to know that it is really a universally admired world heritage and symbol of love. Then I went around Hawa Mahal and Amer Fort in Jaipur. What a spectacular view and painting of the world here, specially food , Indian food have great taste. I would not tried any roadside shops without your suggestion and missed those mouth-watering things.
I am planning to travel Udaipur in the next week and visit some museum to see great architectures and crystal galleries there. You have choose the beast season for me like weather is warm and sunny now . I booked a resort near Digha beach to have some sunbathe.
I am enjoying my trip more than expected and may extend the trip little linger. Thank you very much and I will meet once I am back.
Your sincerely,
XYZ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 74, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ss my profound gratitude for giving me a helpful suggestion form my holiday. I am...
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Line 3, column 95, Rule ID: FROM_FORM[4]
Message: Did you mean 'from'?
Suggestion: from
...ude for giving me a helpful suggestion form my holiday. I am having wonderful time ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Well
...nd I appreciate your choice on that. well, as you recommended , I am visiting the...
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Line 5, column 25, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ice on that. well, as you recommended , I am visiting the cultural and traditio...
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Line 5, column 89, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...tural and traditional heritage of India.I visited Tajmahal and came to know that ...
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Line 5, column 233, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... love. Then I went around Hawa Mahal and Amer Fort in Jaipur. What a spectacular ...
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Line 5, column 326, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...inting of the world here, specially food , Indian food have great taste. I would ...
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Line 5, column 372, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'try'
Suggestion: try
...ian food have great taste. I would not tried any roadside shops without your suggest...
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Line 5, column 452, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ggestion and missed those mouth-watering things. I am planning to travel Udaip...
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Line 7, column 137, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'chosen'.
Suggestion: chosen
...s and crystal galleries there. You have choose the beast season for me like weather is...
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Line 7, column 202, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...or me like weather is warm and sunny now . I booked a resort near Digha beach to h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, really, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 897.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77127659574 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59384853411 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.702127659574 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4999219725 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.75 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159376622444 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505503021708 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418635081586 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0857379096416 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0143526776396 0.0580467560999 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.