Blood spots have become hot topic for debate in recent years. As society develops, it is increasingly seen as an uncivilized activity and cruel to the helpless animals that are killed. All blood sports should be banned. Discuss this giving your opinion.
Blood sports which played by animals who was extremely popular in ancient time, however, modern days people find this type of game not only cruel but also horrible and this inhuman activity should stop. in my opinion, I think it is the high time people should take the step and raise their voice to banned dangerous Sports.
To beginning with several individuals find it amusing when cocks or bulls are fighting each other for no reason. which is terrible. This was started when kings and Emperors used to arrange cockfight or bullfighting for more entering for more entertainment. As a result, a number of helpless animals were forced and died during this event. For an example, history paintings are perfect evidence for this act. But fortunately, modern civilized people are against this horrifying act. Moreover, they hold discussion or seminar to convince people about its dangerous effect and it should get banned.
Another reason these games should be prohibited that this animal has some rights too. Although the human being is considered to be superior. An overall living creature that doesn't necessarily mean other doesn't have the minimal right. In addition, animal right activities are more likely to act in other issue and most of the time this issue get neglected, for instance, several agencies of animal right force people to give up on meat and eat vegetables because it would save animals. Whereas they are not concerned about killing the animal in blood spots.
In conclusion, people are more sophisticated than in the past. For this reason, they understand that dangerous games involving innocent animals or dreadful act and the opine to banned this for forever. I completely agree with the proposition.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, whereas, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 5.05154639175 277% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 937.175257732 155% => OK
No of words: 283.0 206.0 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12014134276 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53476865404 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 127.690721649 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618374558304 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 290.88556701 156% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7116898644 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.2352941176 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6470588235 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.29411764706 4.34317383033 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 1.49484536082 602% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236834357797 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679766527751 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465271357694 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140037492324 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326570768892 0.0580467560999 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 8.71597938144 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 41.2886597938 170% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.