The graph shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer .the pie chart shows how electricity is used in an average English home.
The linear graph reveals the information about the typical daily demands for electricity during the winter and summer in England whereas the pie chart shows the consumption of electricity in various ways in an average house. It is calibrated in units and percentage.It is clear and coherent representation.
Overall,it is evident that in winter power was double in comparison with summer.so , the maximum electricity use to heating rooms and water.
It can be seen that the demand of electricity in winter had above 30,000 in 3 hours then it was decreased in next 7 hours . Furthermore , during 12 to 20 hours the electricity demand again highest which had approximately 48000 whereas in the case of 24 hours it declined.Moreover, in summer it had been less than 20,000 from 3 to 9 hours. Besides, in the next hours it was drop down.
As far as trend was concerned , the maximum power utilized in heating room and water which was 52.5% while for the ovens , kettles, washing machine it had only 17.5% . Apart from this the other things such lighting , t.v, radio, vaccum cleaner,food mixer , electric tools it had been 15%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, moreover, so, then, whereas, while, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 936.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95238095238 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90467125544 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613756613757 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7070998665 43.030603864 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.625 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 5.23603664747 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291418878578 0.215688989381 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116643269058 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.161824796596 0.0843802449381 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185266182999 0.15604864568 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.155291717829 0.0819641961636 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.