You and your friend are planning a picnic in the countryside. Write:
Which arrangements have you already done?
Other activities that can be done
How can your friend help with the arrangements?
Dear Lima,
Hope this letter finds you well. My parents and I are doing great.
At first, I am feeling awesome to let you know that, I have managed to do some arrangements for our picnic in the countryside. You will be glad to know, I hire the place you recommended and told my brother to arrange other facilities, like cooking places, foods, woods, and so on, and guess what! he just called to inform me everything is done.
However, he suggests bringing some extra light because the place is dark and lighting is insufficient. A beautiful river is flowing beside the home we are staying, so we could go fishing. For this purpose, we have to carry fishing equipment.
Look, I am so busy with other stuff. I think you should bring the fishing equipment and books will add extra fun, therefore, make sure to collect them.
I am excited and can't wait any longer for the picnic. See you soon.
With love,
Kiya
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Lima, Hope this letter finds you well. My pare...
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Line 5, column 298, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...oods, woods, and so on, and guess what! he just called to inform me everything is ...
^^
Line 11, column 18, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...re to collect them. I am excited and cant wait any longer for the picnic. See you...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, so, therefore, well, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 762.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61818181818 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42836013928 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.690909090909 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.8681483495 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.5 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.75 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 4.34317383033 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194531239876 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606773170876 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055994506409 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0907500770789 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0728416197826 0.0580467560999 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.92 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.