Many people believe that television programs are of no value for children. Do you agree? Why or why not? Provide reasons and examples to support your response.
Nowadays, so many television programs are available in whole world or many people and also children like to watch the programs but some human beings think that television programs are of no value for children hence others are opposed to this statement. I am going to examine this question from both points of view advantages and disadvantages.
Firstly, I would like to talk about benefits of watching television programs. When children see motivational programs on television then it is very good thing and also beneficial for us. Because when children see that programs then they are face any problem very easily in their future. Moreover, when children see the news programs which is telecast on television every day then children are always aware for that things which is doing around there hometown or also they are up to date for that things which happens in their country.
On the other hand, some people think that television programs are no value for children it is right only for that children who see bad programs on television. Some children see bad movies,songs,etc. which is not good thing for children it is just waste their time and spoil there future.
Overall, it is depend on children to choose which programs are good for their future. When they choose motivational programs then they are successful in their life otherwise they are spoil their future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , songs
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, so, then, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1152.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00869565217 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59896736801 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 176.041082164 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469565217391 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 349.2 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.3303113935 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.727272727 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9090909091 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243893393218 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106476292073 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0915933997686 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169778851294 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659749106026 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.76 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 78.4519038076 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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