Danger activities like extreme skiing, bungee jumping etc should be supported or not.

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Danger activities like extreme skiing, bungee jumping etc should be supported or not.

Ample of masses indulge in the adventurous sports activities for the feeling of extreme ecstasy and bravery, however, there is also no ambiguity in saying that there is lot of peril in doing such dangerous activities. Whether or not they should be encouraged for the masses has left multifarious minds in perplexity.
To commence, in the eyes of some people, it is inevitably evident that dangerous activities like sky diving, extreme skiing and other dangerous sports captivate the multitude in a substantial manner as these activities augment their self confidence with conjoint courageousness which leverage their strengths and eradicate any kind of unnecessary cowardliness. The inner peace of mind that they get through these games is surreal, rendering them with utmost dauntlessness, therefore making them even stronger than before to deal with hardships of life with bravery. Apart from this, Irrefutably, they often tend to usher the society with their fearless support in dire circumstances like floods, droughts, earthquakes and heavy-storms, which not every individual has the capacitance to cope with these kind of catastrophic situations.
While on the contrary, other people contend with the counter saying that there is also no vagueness in stating that the risk of severe injury or even death while performing these extremely-lethal activities is feasible. Also, these sports are not meant for weak-hearten and easily petrified masses, thus these games should not be played by such intimidated minds. -Not to forget, that there is no bigger gift than the reward of life, so it should not be put at hazard for just the sake of fun or to prove bravery among people.
To recapitulate, it can be articulated that sports with adventure should be supported as they built overall inner and outer strength of a person which is a vital ingredient for him to face the adversities of life, but they should be done under the proper guidance of experts with stringent rules and regulations.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ril in doing such dangerous activities. Whether or not they should be encouraged for the masse...
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...To commence, in the eyes of some people, it is inevitably evident that dangerous ...
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...angerous sports captivate the multitude in a substantial manner as these activities augment their self ...
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...h bravery. Apart from this, Irrefutably, they often tend to usher the society wit...
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... the society with their fearless support in dire circumstances like floods, droug...
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...at there is also no vagueness in stating that the risk of severe injury or even ...
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...ely-lethal activities is feasible. Also, these sports are not meant for weak-hear...
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...but they should be done under the proper guidance of experts with stringent rules...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, thus, while, apart from, kind of, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 31.9359605911 153% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1679.0 1207.87684729 139% => OK
No of words: 321.0 242.827586207 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23052959502 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 3.92707691288 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93035988483 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 139.433497537 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582554517134 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 379.143842365 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.5024630542 171% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.3928064223 50.4703680194 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 186.555555556 104.977214359 178% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.6666666667 20.9669160288 170% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.77777777778 7.25397266985 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.33497536946 206% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199058354668 0.242375264174 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832209518908 0.0925447433944 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447035550523 0.071462118173 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125519117243 0.151781067708 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0165134232803 0.0609392437508 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.0 12.6369458128 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 53.1260098522 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 10.9458128079 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.32886699507 118% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 55.0591133005 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.94827586207 211% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.3980295567 154% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.5123152709 200% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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