The letter above tries to convince the reader that allowing skateboarding in the Central Plaza is in the right step to take, since it is in favor of “restoring the Plaza to its former glory”. This is while there seems to be a personal interest in this matter, since the writer owns a “skate shop” in the mentioned Plaza, and not any shop. So, if the city was going to vote again and decide wether or not to lift the prohibition of skateboarding in Central Plaza, there are several qustions to be answered to come into a wise judgment.
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Sentence: So, if the city was going to vote again and decide wether or not to lift the prohibition of skateboarding in Central Plaza, there are several qustions to be answered to come into a wise judgment.
Error: qustions Suggestion: questions
Sentence: People often seem to act differently in urban scapes like Plazas than they do in parks, so the consiquenses of having skateboard users in the Monroe Park and the Central Plaza could be very different.
Error: consiquenses Suggestion: consequences
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