The people from developing nations often migrate from one place to another for better work opportunities that can affect the local living conditions of the developed countries. It can be agreed that migration trends significantly affecting the lifestyle and increased hackles for the native people, while on the other hand stands a different perspective. This essay will elaborate on both sides and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are myriad of problems that are caused by immigrants to the developed nation but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that the people from other nations are becoming the root cause of less work opportunities for the native people. As a well-known example, a longitudinal study conducted by eminent scientists in 2014 demonstrates the relationship between the oversease and the local citizens as well as an exponential increase in unemployement for the local population. Therefore, the people who migrated to the developed countries caused main problem of umemployement for local societies.
Notwithstanding, many people hold an oppossing view and tend to believe that people from abroad are very respectful to the local citizens and their traditions and personal beliefs. Moreover, they are celebrating their festivals and special days as similar as the local people. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favoure of giving the right to overseas people to work in advanced nations.
To conclude, as for myself, as the saying goes “all’s well that ends well,” after analyzing what elaborated above, in my opinion everyone should have freedom to work where ever they want.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 84, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
...oes 'all's well that ends well,' after analyzing what elaborated above,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as for, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3358778626 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0149579511 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595419847328 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.9750822729 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.8 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181541107172 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706542451548 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677341765825 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100266841442 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0824285464433 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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