Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choices of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?
In the current age, many people are influenced with fashion and the kind of clothes they wear. Some people assert that a person's culture and character can be determined from the choices of clothes. Personally, I am not in the favor of this view.
A persons character and culture can be recognized by the way of his personality and the way of speaking. People with good character not necessarily be rich or comes from a backward background. There are some people in the world, in spite of being wealthy do not care about what they wear, they do not believe in the fact of showing off their wealth by wearing fancy clothes or branded wear. They prefer wearing simple clothes and live a decent down to earth life. Thus, we cannot judge on anyone's character or culture by this. A person with good character and cultured comes from the family on how well the parents have groomed their kids. This is only possible by teaching them good values and being a good human being.
On the other hand, some people who can afford and are rich prefer to wear branded clothes to show off their wealth and be in style. They also judge peoples character by checking what the opposite person is wearing. However, it is not necessary that a person wearing branded clothes have a good character or comes from a good cultured background.
To conclude, A good cultured person is the one having clean mind and heart follows with good character who does not harm anyone for his personal matters. I do not agree with the argument that a persons character and culture can be determined by the choice of his clothes.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-09-15 | balaprasant08 | 56 | view |
| 2018-07-02 | saiyedalihusain | 56 | view |
- Some people think that the government should make university education free for all students, regardless of their financial situation. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- Every year several languages die out. This is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- You are looking for a part-time job at a football club.Write a letter to the manager of the football club. In your letter,introduce yourselfexplain what experience and special skills you havetell him/her when you think you could start 56
- Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choices of clothes. Do you agree or disagree? 56
- You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it.Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:Ask for some time off to complete a qualification.Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off.Say how 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 122, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...es they wear. Some people assert that a persons culture and character can be determined...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 3, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
... am not in the favor of this view. A persons character and culture can be recognized...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 196, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...I do not agree with the argument that a persons character and culture can be determined...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, thus, well, kind of, by the way, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1321.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6514084507 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35953066169 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461267605634 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6709088455 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0666666667 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306940913092 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122217442051 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0965827857346 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219708799773 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0204573646411 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.92 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.