Some people think several short holidays from scgool are better, while others think one long summer holiday for the year is better, for children. Discuss and include your own opinion.
It is true said that " an upcoming vacation gives us something to eogerly anticipate." Nevertheless, there are come issues which remains irrvocable and as complex as ever. For intance, the given topic asserts that which are consdier holidays better for holidays; short term holidays and long term holidays. Through this eassy, I shall explore the dimensions of this topic through examples and assertions and shape up my opioion by the end.
On one side, there is a group of people who believe that long term holidays are better. They streng them their view point by claming that long term vacation:painting, music, sports and also other activities doing by children in the long period time holidays. Those puplis who did not focus to study in the school time(in class), and they for sturdy opportunties that these minars ours can do improveing skills in other activities.
For exmaple, California university the conducted survey in the test of IQ level in the year 2008, and during this period of time let's move on to the front that mostly learner active to other types of occupation.
Contrary to this, there is an opposing group of people who believe that short time good for seeker. Because of that short term holidays in children more active in the works and also with them they are ours pending work finish do it. Short duration in apirant maximum energetic and also have been do it feel very relex in home. Such as, some people believe that short time holiday spend time with family and also full entertain the house, and also feel comfortable very well.
To conclusion, weighing both the options, i believe that is no single conclusion still, I take this ground that on effective clap requries both use of hands so, some indiviulas thinking that short time vacation out of the stress and feel also very good for the children. While some multitudes believe good for the other types activities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: period
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Suggestion: done
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Message: Did you mean 'feels'?
Suggestion: feels
...imum energetic and also have been do it feel very relex in home. Such as, some peopl...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... children. While some multitudes believe good for the other types activities. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, nevertheless, so, still, well, while, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91384615385 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52098224494 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550769230769 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.4971104678 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.846153846 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15384615385 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274478470734 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101481060732 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079008368446 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141033612317 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363691470797 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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