Today's era is all about technology, as technology has expanded in not only in the case of information technology but also ease the life of people in several ways. Some people think that the advance automation mitigate the human interaction while othet believe that technology give us enormous means to communicate and interact with others. Leys delve deeper to discuss both the views.
First and the foremost reason that why people think that technology reduces the interaction among people is that people are too busy in their own life doing extra stuff qith the help of technology like surfing on net through computers and phones. Moreover, automation provide us many options to perform for example, playing games, watching movies at home through home theatrical. Adding to it, some human beings like to use other applications rather than using modes of technology to communicate with others, to exemplify, high tech televisions, high tech cameras for photography, etc.
On the flip side some believe that technology provide us so many modes and objects to connect with othet human beings, objects like mobile phones, computers, laptops, tablets and so on through which we can use several applications like Whatsapp, Facebook, Instagram, Hike and many more for texting or messaging to some one. Secondly, it also gives option to have a video call through apps like Google duo and skype. Thirdly, telecommunication help us to meet new people sitting all around the world, for example, parents who are sitting far from their children, students and teacher, boss and employees, thus, improves the relationship among them and enhances the interaction.
In a conclusion, technology help us to reduce distances and gap between people sitting far away not only through texting but also through videos calling using numerous technology devices.
- Many people believe that mobile phones cause more harms than the benefits and that s why mobile phones should be restricted To what extent do you agree or disagree Give reasons to support your viewpoint 84
- As a result of electronic inventions such as the computer and television, people do less physical activity, and this is having a negative effect on their health.To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
- Some people believe that a crime is a result of social problems and poverty, others think that crime is a result of bad person's nature. Discuss and give your opinion. 78
- Some people believe that our ever-increasing use of technology significantly reduces our opportunities for human interaction. Other people believe that technology provides us with new and better ways to communicate and connect with one another. 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, while, as for, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28571428571 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71326255587 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58843537415 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.9364484692 49.4020404114 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.4 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352697559982 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12532052947 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827553032541 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218524563637 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038110646214 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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