The graphs below show the weekly earnings of men and women in euros for the 16-59 age groups as per their own education level.
The given vertical chart reveal the information about the weekly earnings of graduate and below graduate men and women at the age of 16-59 as per their education level. The data is calibrated in euros. It is clear and coherent representation.
In the first graph, the average earnings of 16-19 below graduate men group is 100 euros. In the age group of 20-24 both: graduate men, and below graduate men earn 210 and 2oo euros respectively. After that it is slightly increased and goes to 410 euros which is earn by graduate men, and 400 euros earn by undergraduate men in the age group of 32-39. At last, in the age of 50-59 the earnings of graduate men is reached to approximately 700 euros whereas the earning of below graduate men is 500 euros.
In the second graph, below graduate women earn 100 euros at the age of 16-19 whereas graduate women started earning at the age group of 20-24. In the age group of 25-29, 30-39, 40-49, 50-59 the earning of below graduate women is 190 euros, 250 euros, 225 euros, and 250 euros respectively whereas the earning of graduate women is remain same that is 300 in these age groups.
Overall, it is evident that men earn more money as compared to women in all age groups.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1002.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 219.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57534246575 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43514744497 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.401826484018 0.547539520022 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 291.6 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.9108648723 43.030603864 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.2 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 5.23603664747 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 1.69756097561 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.448489807275 0.215688989381 208% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.20851392364 0.103423049105 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122380521399 0.0843802449381 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.295228434222 0.15604864568 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0762909369798 0.0819641961636 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.