Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent.
Do you agree or disagree?
Education means all round development of an individual and not completed syllabus or varied courses being offered by schools, colleges and universities. It becomes essential to educate young lads to improve their persona and to acclimatize with the other future roles and responsibilities which life demands thus raising a question of eternal debate ‘Should parental education be taken into consideration while educating children at school’?
It would not be wrong if we say that parenting acts as a building block or foundation of a civilized society, as the parents are the first teachers and responsible for the behavior and habits of their children. Juveniles learn the morals of life along with the rituals, cultures and customs of the society they belong to.
By imbibing good parental qualities among children we can set parameters within the society which leads to a better civilized society. Moreover, exposing children to such education will help the children to understand the psychology of their parents and will help them build a strong relationship bond with their parents and vice-versa.
Indeed, parenting is an important aspect of life. One must learn the art to be a good parent as this role demands a lot of challenges and commitment. So, one should be well prepared for these roles. Moreover, such education will make children more expressive and open with their parents. What is more, exposure to greater responsibilities will boost their confidence and also improve their problem solving and decision making qualities which are really important for life. All in all, it’s a good idea to teach children to be a good parent.
- Some people believe that children are given too much free time They feel that this time should be used to do more school work How do you think children should spend this time 80
- Some people feel that entertainers (e.g. – Film stars, pop musicians and sport stars) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree?Which other type of jobs should be highly paid. 94
- Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house as compared with living in an apartment? 90
- By investing in tourism we can earn a lot of revenue and growth in national economy at the same time it damages the local culture What is your opinion 76
- General Writing Task - 1Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday.Write a letter to your friend. In your Letter -> Thank them for the photos and for the holiday-> Explain 74
Sentence: It becomes essential to educate young lads to improve their persona and to acclimatize with the other future roles and responsibilities which life demands thus raising a question of eternal debate Should parental education be taken into consideration while educating children at school'?
Error: persona Suggestion: personality
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 12 15
No. of Words: 266 350
No. of Characters: 1353 1500
No. of Different Words: 153 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.039 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.086 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.8 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 100 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 82 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 57 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 34 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.167 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.455 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.344 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.571 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.086 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5