One should have enough money to fulfill our basic needs and rest of the should be given to needy people. To what extent do u agree or disagree.
It is certainly true that money plays indispensable role to fulfill our basic needs. However, one of the most controversial here is of remaining money left after fulfilling our basic needs; should that money be given to needy or not? I am completely disagreed with the given statement and shall explore the same facets in the upcoming paragraphs.
There are ample of reasons why the remaining money after fulfilling our necessities should not be given to the needy. First and foremost reason is hard work and struggle. The person who has huge amount money has earned it by hard work and struggle in their life. Moreover, they spent midnight lamps to earn it or to achieve. So they would never give their earned money to anyone because they are already paying the taxes to the authorities for the development of the country. A best epitome of this is a recent survey, conducted by Hindustan Times revealed that more than 30℅ rich people deny to give their remaining money to needy people because they are already paying huge taxes for welfare of the country.
Secondly, why people do not agree to hand their remaining money to needy is due to misusage of that money. For instance, many beggars on the roadside or at any public places beg money not to fulfill their necessities: food, shelter and clothes but to use that money in evil deeds. Moreover, they start taking drugs at early age, and get addicted to them. In addition to this, they never utilise that money in good way which further decline their growth, and the level of country's poverty remained at same position instead of decreasing.
Nevertheless, as we have many answers to this question however, on balance I tend to believe that collide effort s of both individual and government can curb this issue because it is not only the responsibility of citizens but authorities too.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82389937107 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53990734213 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559748427673 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4193146702 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.571428571 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232756449081 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865073244128 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1093729828 0.0667982634062 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139688972239 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106813644681 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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