Teachers during the history had a very crucial role in education and learning process for people and in the past they were appreciated more than present.Even in most of religions people were encouraged to appreciate every person that taught them something and they had to obey them.During the time this role has been changed and I agree with the sentence that nowadays teachers are less appreciated than before due to lots of resources that people can learn about and the technology advancement decrease their role in the class.
First of all, in the past the only way of learning something was trough teachers and they past their knowledge from generation to generation.Teachers in the past were more respected and students obeyed them in the class and honoured them.I have heard that some of the students worked a lot to attract their teacher’s attention to learn more.Nowadays, student can learn from different resources and even some learn in their home. So the importance of their role become less than before.
Furthurmore,in the class most of the teacher use technology which help them to better teach in the class and this technological advancement could be a substitude of their role in the class and their special role in the class become less. For instance,some of the students in the class can search about everything in the class at the same time of instructing and correct every mistake of their teacher.Knowing that teachers are not enough could reduce their crucial role in learning process and most of the students learn to rely on their research and reference not their teacher.
Moreover,appreciation in the past was completely obeying that person and it was applied to parents as well but recently everything and even moral issues have been changed .Nowadays children do not obey their parents and teachers as the past and they have their opinion and discuss their desire and needs.So the way of respecting others have changed and this applied for teachers as well.
In conclusion,although some believe teachers are respected as before, I personally think students are more independent in time being.In fact, by technology advancement ,teachers role in the class and their nessecity for learning has been decreased in learning process. Also the way of respecting others has been completely changed during recent years.Thus teachers are appreciated less than before.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, thus, well, even so, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2008.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 389.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16195372751 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99089402954 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.416452442159 0.524837075471 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 604.8 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 20.1344086022 238% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 146.849412665 48.9658058833 300% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 251.0 100.406767564 250% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.625 20.6045352989 236% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.375 5.45110844103 245% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.5376344086 433% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14091706265 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743842555849 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462599526305 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0984055815836 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450320327159 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.2 11.7677419355 231% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 22.76 58.1214874552 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 10.1575268817 217% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.54 10.9000537634 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 10.002688172 290% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.2 10.0537634409 211% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 22.0 10.247311828 215% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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