Polygamy had lead to massive divide rate around the globe ? Give possible solution and discuss reason behind the issue.
Polygamy is defined as the process that which is a custom of having more than one wife at the same time.It is the unboudtly the case that polygamy. In this essay this asserts that which people mostly prefer polygamy through divose rate incline dramatically.although through this essay I shall explore they have some either cause or solutions with my assertion.Because their are more influence on people that is polygamy.
In summary, with the seen of both sides of arguments that which is the responsibility of government because politics implementation some stranger laws for people.
To commence with, that polygamy have a main reason on people. Moreover, this is inclined by some personal discrimination ; those are unlikeness between male and female. Although, they are agree for marriage with unlikely person because through their families pressurised to do.whereas, relationship between gender is not good . That is the reason People take a setups of divose . While, they have some solutions are that after marriage gender adjustable relationship. Afterthat, some time after automatically good bond develop . However, when they think have both the adjustment for maintenance of relationship. Then throughout this is thinking automatically relationship also stood . Finally, it is single solution for this reason
As far away, polygamy have one another cause is about education related difference between gender. On moving, when males are more educated than females then some type of discrimination automatically develop. Although, In that situation person also taken a setup of divose because they have thinking not match with each other as well as so many differences into their study about it . Regarding this, they have been living standards also decline. Because some friends also makes fun of his friend that is wife is lake of knowledge. Then , this types of situation also developed. For best refer epitome of that, A survey is conducted by Hindustan times newspaper by government for awareness upon disadvantages of polygamy. Whereas, through it people have more and more knowledge ,and leads to good relationship between gender as well as eradication of divose like cause into the world . Moreover, with the help of ministry.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, well, whereas, while, in summary, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1892.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40571428571 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03672783214 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522857142857 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 613.8 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.327022424 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0608937496436 0.244688304435 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0218660181969 0.084324248473 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344700438845 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0382628496446 0.151304729494 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029126122178 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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