Some people argue that capital punishment is good for a country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the modern era of globalisation, it is undeniable that crime rates are gradually uplifting all over the world. Proponents support death penalty implementation for the benefit of a nation while opponents deny the same. I partly favour the fact of capital punishment for the development of a country, but also feel that the criminals must obtain a second chance to rectify their faults.
At the outset, capital punishment installation in a country will ensure the decline of crime rates persisting currently. There has been a tremendously increasing trend in crimes such as rape, brutal murder and other death-related cases that disturbs many. For instance, this death affects not only the victims but also their families who are dependent on these individuals. It causes an irrecoverable loss that can never be replaced forever. Hence, following death penalty imposition will reduce the alarming rates of death crimes.
On the other hand, I believe that these crime doers can be provided with a second opportunity in case they are willing to change themselves. The Government can facilitate them with rehabilitation centres to make sure they regain their good humane nature. To give a clear example, a recent research proved that rehabilitation centres have transformed many lives of criminals for the betterment of them, thereby for the society. This ensures that we can obtain a nation free from criminals and crime rates thus offering a rebirth for the offenders to live their lives fruitfully.
In conclusion, although enforcing death punishment decreases crimes in a country, providing another opportunity to these people indulged in criminal activities can help transform their lives for the betterment of the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, second, so, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35897435897 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94697238621 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59706959707 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7864735771 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.538461538 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121234554959 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0429546868891 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468775774098 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0862664266768 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342225393807 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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