TPO-05 - Independent Writing Task
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment-doing things they like to do-rather than doing things they should do.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There are a lot of debate going on whether people should spent their time doing on personal things they like rather than things they need to accomplish. Most of the time things can be easily be done if you like the things you are doing, rather, than dragging your self to finish certain task. In my opinion, it is utmost important to spend your time on things you like due to you will be easily accomplish task because you love doing it. In addition, you can be productive, hence, you will be not stress and finish the project on time. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, by doing the things you like, outcome of your work will be productive. In a sense, that less error would occur, and you can finish ahead of schedule. Additionally, brains opt to be creative and imaginative to produce a high caliber project. On the other hand, individuals who needed to do things they don't like tends to be of poor performance, less inputs are being drawn into the task.My own experience is a compelling example of this. I am a architect in a big company here at the US, our boss assigned me to design modern houses for our clients, so, as I was planning on the design and structure of my project, good inputs was created due to i like the things I was doing, which our clients loved and appreciate the design and landed the contract to furnish the design. I strongly believe if you love the things you are doing, your work will be accepted and noticed by other people and also you will be efficient at that task.
Secondly, when you are committed on certain task you love the end result would lead to cooperation on other people, you will not force yourself to finish the project on time. For instance, I have a friend in college, my professor assigned her to do research on the culture on native Filipino's, she gladly accept the challenged and did her part in finishing her report. She finished the report on ahead of time, she also did her report fun for the class by making story telling of culture in the Philippines. She go beyond the usual stuff in reporting on class, hence, my professor and classmates really enjoyed her lecture that day and we learned a lot from her, it was interactive and fun at the same time. Accordingly, I think that it is important to do the things you enjoy to be productive and efficient.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that it is essential to spend one's time doing they are passionate with. This is because your work would be more efficient, productive, and creative at the same time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 316, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ndividuals who needed to do things they dont like tends to be of poor performance, l...
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Line 3, column 359, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun inputs is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...t like tends to be of poor performance, less inputs are being drawn into the task.My...
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Line 3, column 401, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: My
...ss inputs are being drawn into the task.My own experience is a compelling example ...
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Line 3, column 457, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...e is a compelling example of this. I am a architect in a big company here at the ...
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Line 3, column 660, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...project, good inputs was created due to i like the things I was doing, which our ...
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Line 5, column 306, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'accepts'.
Suggestion: accepts
...culture on native Filipinos, she gladly accept the challenged and did her part in fini...
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Line 5, column 513, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'She' must be used with a third-person verb: 'goes'.
Suggestion: goes
...ling of culture in the Philippines. She go beyond the usual stuff in reporting on ...
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Line 5, column 772, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'enjoy being'.
Suggestion: enjoy being
...at it is important to do the things you enjoy to be productive and efficient. In conclus...
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Line 7, column 65, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...y believe that it is essential to spend ones time doing they are passionate with. Th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, first, hence, if, really, second, secondly, so, for instance, i feel, i think, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 71.0 43.0788530466 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2113.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 471.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48619957537 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65859790218 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47579507681 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.469214437367 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 651.6 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 22.0 9.59856630824 229% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.7250974428 48.9658058833 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.388888889 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1666666667 20.6045352989 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.55555555556 5.45110844103 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277600339043 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110443495109 0.076458572812 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105823157943 0.0737576698707 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18836436513 0.150856017488 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0728489959663 0.0645574589148 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 58.1214874552 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.