When families have a meal together,it is considered as a social activity.do you agree that eating together is important to the people of your country.
Family is the priceless treasure gifted by god to everyone. Nowadays, taking food together by all family members is considered as a social activity. As it is known that eating with family lead to many pleasant consequences such as strengthens relationship bond, enhance our moral values, preserve culture values etc. This essay strongly agree with statement.
To begin with, eating together by families can cause many acceptable results. First, owing to hectic schedule families member can not be able to spend enough time with their family members but group eating give them excellent opportunities to attract with them and they can share their all day happening as well. Generally, people call the eating time as family time since all members are present and they can enjoy their meal. As a result, family time strengthens the relationship bond, members come closer to each other, parents use to inform their children about their culture which ultimately preserve their culture.
Furthermore, children get chance while eating togather to demand for something essential for their study. Also, they can pose the problems pertaining to academic programme, sports event or any other notion in front of their parents. Similarly, Parents get opportunity to give some moral values, or to advocate their offsprings during their meal together. They can be able to bring them with positive comments that enhance their self confidence.
To sum up, I do agree that eating together is significant to members of my family as it does not only strengthen the relationship bond but also give opportunities to parents and children to share their problems, experience, and all day happenings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, similarly, so, then, well, while, such as, as a result, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35877862595 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82865373925 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564885496183 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 114.515009933 49.4020404114 232% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 175.5 106.682146367 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.75 20.7667163134 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.375 7.06120827912 204% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163764145436 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731186853786 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565443516462 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111781629828 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444265652083 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.2 13.0946893788 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.4 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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