In today’s society, the advancement of technology has some problems, that the government should provide rigorous laws to keep people safe, and the young people must follow and obey them. In my opinion, however, what we hear from the news of the world, such as suicide attacks and espionage attacks, most of the member of these groups are young people, so the government’s must be strict rules, especially in countries like the United States that carry weapons.
First, I want to start my discussion with an example to explain my opinion in a better way, in Australia, they have some Australian values statement, that means You must sign this statement if you are aged 18 years or over. The people should be swearing that, to understand and obeying all of them. Like as, Australian society values respect for the freedom and dignity of the individual, freedom of religion, commitment to the rule of law, Parliamentary democracy, equality of men and women and a spirit of egalitarianism that embraces mutual respect, tolerance, fair play and compassion for those in need and pursuit of the public good.
Second, on the other hand, some rules are deriding and awful, and none-logical, like as, some Australian rules, some of them are; ‘’It is illegal to be ‘drunk’ in pubs in Australia’’ or ‘’After midday on Sunday in Victoria it is illegal to wear pink pants’’ or ‘’ Children under the age of 18 are prohibited to buy cigarettes, but can smoke as many as they want’’ because of this third law they have to beg, borrow and steal.
Third, in some countries the rules are against of the citizenships rights, and their source is compulsory religious instructions that clerical politicians will not allow women to decide on their clothes and forcefully use the hijab, like as Iran.
In conclusion, the laws of every country, no matter how ridiculous or stupid, the people of the country are forced to obey them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, third, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1780.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 349.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10028653295 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18500934531 2.67179642975 119% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56446991404 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 14.0 4.94265232975 283% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.1344086022 189% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 120.288541987 48.9658058833 246% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 197.777777778 100.406767564 197% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.7777777778 20.6045352989 188% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1111111111 5.45110844103 204% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114520898838 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065518844515 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500300102697 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.068727056973 0.150856017488 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446704390212 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.0 11.7677419355 187% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.91 58.1214874552 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 10.1575268817 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.0537634409 171% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.247311828 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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