how widely do you think the problem spreads that people that spend too much time on work than their personnel life and experience time shortage?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people think that problem spreads that people spend too much time on work rather than personal life and experience. There is a widespread worry that would only leads to a myriad of concerns. In this essay, there will be an examination of the views, before deducing an even handed conclusion.
There are number of argument in favor of my stance. The most preponderant is that heavy work load on employees leading to domastic violence and induce gaps in between family mambers as they have pressure to complete the work before deadline. Working long hours by sitting at a same place without moving, so it creates many health hazard like obesity, backpain and so on.
Another pivotal aspect of this argument that work pressure creates unbalance between personal and professional life which can lead to depression among worker in some cases. For example, employees in MNC needs to spend extra hours with their families in given weekend and some time they help to travel in different countries to meet the demand of their clients, so that they have less time for family which can result in severe problems between couples.
To conclude, having pondered over above stated, it is crystal clear that spending to much time on work leads to many several problems which cannot be margainlized.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, for example, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 31.9359605911 141% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1149.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 233.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9313304721 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45529575077 2.71678728327 90% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609442060086 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.0787265499 50.4703680194 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.666666667 104.977214359 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8888888889 20.9669160288 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 7.25397266985 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259248083301 0.242375264174 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.091442133071 0.0925447433944 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120243523106 0.071462118173 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156347590391 0.151781067708 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0774505133095 0.0609392437508 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 53.1260098522 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 71.5 Out of 90
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