Domestic production, has been grown from past few years in almost every country. People are running huge businesses in this field and getting a lots of benefits but apart from merits there are also some demerits of domestic production. Lets delve deeper to the following paragraphs to discuss both the advantages and disadvantages.
First and the foremost pros of foreign investment is that it build relationships among two nations. Thus, it mitigate the differences. Moreover, the knowledge of the business increases among businessman by investing for various purposes like for vehicles, hotels and so on. Furthermore, the taxes which government implies on these production helps the nation's development like by building bridges, making roads and highways, and many more works for society.
On the other hand, there are also various cons of domestic production, firstly, many a times they investors get loss of money which effect their financial state. Secondly, investment is sometimes said to be a risky thing to do as no one knows that it will going to effect you negatively or positively. Hemce, domestic production is a big risk to take.
In a conclusion, domestic production is beneficial for each and every country but it has both advantages and disadvantages.
- As a result of electronic inventions such as the computer and television, people do less physical activity, and this is having a negative effect on their health.To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
- A cursory discussion about advantages and disadvantages of domestic product 56
- Some people believe that our ever-increasing use of technology significantly reduces our opportunities for human interaction. Other people believe that technology provides us with new and better ways to communicate and connect with one another. 67
- Many people believe that mobile phones cause more harms than the benefits and that s why mobile phones should be restricted To what extent do you agree or disagree Give reasons to support your viewpoint 84
- Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
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Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
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Message: Did you mean 'mitigates'?
Suggestion: mitigates
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Suggestion: a time; times
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'go'
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, apart from, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1077.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 203.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30541871921 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96502622647 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.665024630542 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9433068036 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9090909091 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4545454545 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0909090909 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17489837171 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671541562405 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736526741124 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115872832106 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670729162556 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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