The diagram below shows a process for turning dirty water into clean water.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates how dirty water is cleansed into fresh water. Generally, there are five main stages to proceed this process.
The first stage of the procedure is collecting and pouring dirty water with muddy water into a bottle without bottoms which is put downwards.Then, the dirty and muddy water permeate through a filter paper to prevent unwanted matters first. After that, the liquid goes through gravel and small rocks. Later, the fine sand leads the liquid down to clarify. Subsequently, this water is latched on cotton wool filter.
Consequently, there will occur the phenomenon of clean water step by step fall into a glass through the mouth of the bottle.

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Average: 2.2 (1 vote)
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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 142, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Then
... without bottoms which is put downwards.Then, the dirty and muddy water permeate thr...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 3.0 24.0651302605 12% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 565.0 1615.20841683 35% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 111.0 315.596192385 35% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09009009009 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.24586718041 4.20363070211 77% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51065419075 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 75.0 176.041082164 43% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.675675675676 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 164.7 506.74238477 33% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 62.8921980172 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.7142857143 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8571428571 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261032668779 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108498032294 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0944925520371 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186911567378 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0724711073129 0.056905535591 127% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 78.4519038076 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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