Table chart expounds the information about student enrolment at Bristo university during years 1928, 1958 and 2008.
Having a first glance it is magnified that, number of students enrolled were 218, 1046 and 6377 respectively in years 1928, 1958 and 2008. Moreover, proportion for female was 42%, 32% and 54% respectively during years 1928, 1958 and 2008. Along with this, the percentage for male was attributed to 68%, 58% in year 1928. Minimum percentage for male could be seen in year 2008 was 46%.
A closer look at illustration reveals that, the proportion of male come from within 30 males of Bristol was maximum in year 1928 and minimum proportion could be seen in years 1958 and 2008 constituted to 14%, 1-2% respectively. Lastly, percentage came from overseas was minimum in years 1928 and 1958 was 5% and 6%. In year 2008, percentage came from overseas was maximum attributed to 28%.
overall, maximum number of students were enrolled in year 2008 and minimum in year 1958.
- The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 67
- The table below shows the figures for imprisonment in five countries between 1930 and 1980. 78
- The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourists facilities.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 56
- The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000. 73
- Nowadays, families are not as close as in the past and a lot of people have become used to this.Explain the reasons for this and discuss any possible effects it may have on society._ 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Overall
...seas was maximum attributed to 28%. overall, maximum number of students were enroll...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, lastly, look, moreover
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 827.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98192771084 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57612366209 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512048192771 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 216.9 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.0720487952 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8888888889 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4444444444 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194728193439 0.215688989381 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112302702422 0.103423049105 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111157651504 0.0843802449381 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184421699455 0.15604864568 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129408762647 0.0819641961636 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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