More and more people claim that modern work patterns are a source of stress. What do you think are the cause of this? Can you suggest some possible solution?
People have to work in order to make money and provide themselves with the things they need. However, these days most people are becoming very tired of doing the same stressfully job day after day. The reason is that many people do their job not organizing their time correctly and even if they work so hard they get low salary. Besides, promoting qualification regularly and the lack of experienced staff can be the other reasons. This issue is not too significant, so it can be solved in some ways.
Majority of employees think their job is stressful, for they do a lot of work, yet get low payment. Of course, it is not fear. Nowadays working systems are developing, so it also becoming harder and harder to work. Another reason is people usually do not arrange their time correctly, so they face a lot of problems. Sometimes coming late does also effect to stress. There will be some breaks in timetable and a member of staff will be made to do the skipped job in free time or at home.
Nowadays factors are developing significantly, so changes occur often. Such as: new technologies, new methods of working and etc. These changes make staff to learn them and waste their time with studying even if they have finished the boring thing. They have to go in the special institutions to promote their qualification. Otherwise, they will not be allowed to their workplace anymore!
Most companies take only experienced people to work for them. Obviously, skilled workers are not many. As a result, there will be lack of staff. They will be made to do all difficult jobs fast. Then people suffer from stress. If there were enough staff there would not be this kind of problem.
In my opinion, the jobs which involve few members of staff should increase their salary and sometimes they should be encouraged to relax. In some companies, sport facilities or massage is available. As a result there were not so many stressed people. In the other sectors people should have a day off at the time they feel exhausted.
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