Some people think that it is good think for senior management position to have very high salary compared to other workers of the same company or organisation . To what extent do you agree.
' Money is not only the answer, but it makes a difference' every people think that they have more and more money . Despite it is possible only by a good job.earn is more great impact on everyone. Because when they earn more then they fullfil our requirements. However, it is possible only by hardwork. In this essay that should executive people are higher position; earn additional rather than employees or not? through this topic. According to my perception I totally synthesized to this statement.
On the whole, that administration earn being extra than other employees through their position because this person as a truth worthy person. Moreover, they achieve this types of higher position by additional experience .
First of all, company properly depends of administrative processes. They have more responsibility of all work of business that is done by their employees. Although, senior management earn more due to experience on moving, they are spend all the mid night for do being company, factory's work. Subsequently, this is the main reason they are achieved highest position by their concentration on business as well as honesty is the best policy . Therefore, they have large status symbol. Finally, company is progressed by senior management planning according. Because company's either lose or profit also depends upon their knowledge.
Second of all that senior management are more responsibility of business that is the reason they earn maximum amount than others. Moreover, those types of responsibility are fullfil by proper authorities. Therefore, administrative as major person of company , and company dramatically incline for working by their planed . However, the owner are company impressed those types of persons that do their work of company with proper authorities as well as concentration. That is why they stood at a higher position as a company's manager, and achieve maximum amount of salaries than others. A refer epitome for this essay shows by ADT company owner for awareness purpose to people that manager always well able due to their experience than others like employees.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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....earn is more great impact on everyone. Because when they earn more then they fullfil o...
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...always well able due to their experience than others like employees.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, well, as well as, first of all, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1778.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33933933934 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90322777043 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495495495495 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 567.9 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0604796998 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.8181818182 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1363636364 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.59090909091 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 16.0 3.4128256513 469% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168435625738 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499049015729 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413920957718 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101265519864 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429903642728 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.1 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.