Nowadays, many people are becoming an iconoclast against the famous saying that always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship just to avoid any sort of troubles and ameliorate themselves in front of others. But, believe me or not, lie does not go in a long run. Though speaking the truth always can be a hard job, but we can make our best in order to stick to it. Speaking truth can sometimes be circumstantial, and we will be discussing this later in the topic on both the aspects.
As human beings, we are surrounded by several relationships - friends, family, spouse - and the base of all these relationships lies on honesty, trustworthiness and the most important of all is the truthfulness. If all these are not there, the relationships would go for a toss. For example, in case of a newly married couple, who just began a new phase of their life, being truthful really matters because that is the beginning phase of their life where they start to trust each other by speaking the truth. Here, if somebody starts to lie and later that person gets caught, the other one would be completely shattered. According me me, if they are facing any sort of issues, they should tell the other person about the condition or the situation they are going through, so that the other person may be aware and help him or her, if need be.
On the contrary, if we see a parent child relationship where the father suppose has some kind of ailment and he does not want his child to be scared, he could lie temporarily for a good reason, what we often call as a 'white lie'.
So, according to me, always speaking truth is important and essential and we should stick to it as much as possible, but in some circumstantial cases, we might not speak the truth in order to avoid any adverse effect.
- TPO-14 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- TPO-02 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 76
- TPO-49 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 632, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: me
...ould be completely shattered. According me me, if they are facing any sort of issues,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, really, so, for example, kind of, sort of, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 326.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57668711656 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68348109574 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549079754601 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.485476216 48.9658058833 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.636363636 100.406767564 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6363636364 20.6045352989 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.54545454545 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127829944887 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512978456129 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523484042545 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0816787353588 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378085188339 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.1575268817 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.88 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 86.8835125448 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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