describ the importance of newspaper in to days life
science has blesset us magnificent electronic gadgets to upgrade life style. Here, I would like to establish my view about newspaper. newspaper plays a phenomenal role in our life so, newspaper is a significant part of life and it goes without saying that newspaper is colled mirror of society.
moreover newspaper allows us to upgrade knowledge everyday like as the first page of newspaper gives political knowledge that some political leader meet each other and discuss about law,problems, finicaly, vot bank, roles and so on.
moreover, newspaper caters lot of advertisement such as about mobile phone,job opportunities,New things in market,computer, electronic dives which makes life style easier furthermore, 2nd page gives information about television show that which shows coming up to 9 pm and coming up movies in market.
what is more, business page knowledge about business that some company deal to other company as a result buying gold, increaseing dollar, how many tax take by government to business company.in addition, 2nd last page of newspaper gives knowledge about sports player and there achievement madal,about make new records and which game coming up in this time.so, in this way we gain profound knowledge by newspaper,therefore I read newspaper daily.
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Sentence: science has blesset us magnificent electronic gadgets to upgrade life style.
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Sentence: Here, I would like to establish my view about newspaper. newspaper plays a phenomenal role in our life so, newspaper is a significant part of life and it goes without saying that newspaper is colled mirror of society.
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Sentence: what is more, business page knowledge about business that some company deal to other company as a result buying gold, increaseing dollar, newspaper,therefore I read newspaper daily.
Error: increaseing Suggestion: increasing
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No. of Words: 205 350
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Always put a space after punctuation marks. E-rater is sensitive.
Always capitalize the first letter of a sentence.
The content is not well organized, better like this:
para 1: introduction.
para 2: reason 1
para 3: reason 2
para 4: reason 3 (optional)
para 5: conclusion
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 3 2
No. of Sentences: 8 15
No. of Words: 205 350
No. of Characters: 1049 1500
No. of Different Words: 127 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.784 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.117 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.706 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 76 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 56 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 44 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 33 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 31 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 19.606 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.8 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.548 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.875 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.256 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5