Which one is the most important factor to help you work productively?
- Having an environment which is free of noise and distractions
- Knowing that you will receive a reward
- Doing something you are interested in
Throughout history, working productively has been considered as a problem. Human resources sections in most of the companies are dealing with finding new strategies for improving the productivity of employees. In this regard, there is a controversial debate among individuals about various agents which can impact on the performance of people. Some people may hold the view that being interested is the most significant factor, while, some others take the opposite viewpoint. The latter group believes that some other elements such as the environment and giving a reward are more important than passion. I strongly contend that working in the interested field play a crucial role in people’ success. In the following, I will elaborate upon my standpoint through two pieces of evidence.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that people who deal with their favorite problems can resolve tough issues more effectively. It is generally agreed that those who face a dilemma that is interested in not only put more effort into its solutions but also spend more time for coping with the problem. Therefore, it is highly probable that these individuals find the most efficient way for a problem helping them to climb the carrier ladder more quickly. Take a personal experience as an example; when I studied in primary school, my first goal was to attend my favorite major in a high-ranked university. I was a great tendency to continuing my education in mathematics thanks to its applications. With this in mind, I allocated more than 5-month studying mathematics. In other words, I did my best for mastering the skills that are required for entrance my favorite university. Had not I interested in my future major, I would have not devoted to such a great time for studying.
Another reason which deserves some words here is that those working on their loved field inclined to take more risk which opens doors for optimizing performance. No one can neglect the fact that people doing a favorite task, tend to face various challenges. Following this strategy although can pose a threat to their prosperity; it would push people out of their comfort zone. In this circumstance, people usually attempt to apply their high intelligence and ability for approving themselves to their bosses which can pave the way for being more prosperous. According to a recent study that was published in Time magazine, researchers investigated the relationship between the passion and expertise in more than 1200 pilots around the world. The result of the study shows that pilots with a passion towards their career tended to cope with more risky air travels. Consequently, Needless to say, the more some pilots face these challenges, the more they would promote in their job.
In brief, one can logically conclude that doing something that he is interested in benefit him concerning performance regarding its capability of spending more time and energy for solving the problems and taking more challenges. However, there are other reasons and examples, challenging these reasons, not mentioned above. All in all, it is highly recommended that a survey can assess the validity of this argument and the consequences of other agents on this phenomenon.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, while, as to, in brief, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.0286738351 199% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2717.0 1977.66487455 137% => OK
No of words: 527.0 407.700716846 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15559772296 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79129216042 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84701951685 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 282.0 212.727598566 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535104364326 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 853.2 618.680645161 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0049510201 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.68 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.08 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105710541511 0.236089414692 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0315928568314 0.076458572812 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0307061172491 0.0737576698707 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0727282172909 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04657531014 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 153.0 86.8835125448 176% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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