Both the passage and lecture are mainly about reading books. The author of the passage claims that people nowadays tend to read less than they used to do in the past while the professor of the lecture casts doubt on the claim made in the passage. Therefore, she challenges each point in the passage by clarifying information to support her attitude.
To commence with, the passage states that the number of books, that are being read today, are dwindling little by little. As a result, people knowledge and literature are declining in the same way, but the professor, on the opposite side, argues that when people do not read books, that does not mean they have less knowledge. In addition, she thinks that when reading short literature, it is much more favorable than reading long and complicated books. they are literature after all.
Second, it is also stated in the passage that not only less books are the problem because what supplanted books is another vital problem. It is indicated in the passage that people tend to watch television, listen to music or reading from websites instead of reading books or novels. In contrast, the professor is totally against this misleading point. She reports that literature got much different to the past, and it is not necessary to adhere reading in order to be imaginative because there is also unreadable literature when somebody listen to remarkable music or watches good movies, for example.
Finally, the passage indicates that writers nowadays lack to support.in addition there are lots of professional writers need encouragement from audience by reading their writings. on the contrary, the professor admits that it is not the readers' fault. She says writers should be palmed for their complicated and unfavorable books in many cases.
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...g information to support her attitude. To commence with, the passage states tha...
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...han reading long and complicated books. they are literature after all. Second...
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... books. they are literature after all. Second, it is also stated in the passage...
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...ed books is another vital problem. It is indicated in the passage that people ten...
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...c or watches good movies, for example. Finally, the passage indicates that writ...
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...ed and unfavorable books in many cases.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, second, so, therefore, while, after all, for example, in addition, in contrast, as a result, in many cases, on the contrary, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.4613686534 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 22.412803532 120% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 30.3222958057 139% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1373.03311258 109% => OK
No of words: 296.0 270.72406181 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05405405405 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59272877733 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 145.348785872 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527027027027 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 419.366225166 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 3.25607064018 307% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.746744425 49.2860985944 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.857142857 110.228320801 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 21.698381199 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7142857143 7.06452816374 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 4.19205298013 262% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365628562527 0.272083759551 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120890002877 0.0996497079465 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753804075418 0.0662205650399 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213948401767 0.162205337803 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100547924097 0.0443174109184 227% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.3589403974 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.8541721854 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.2367328918 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 63.6247240618 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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