Some people spend their entire lives in one place. Others move a number of times throughout their lives, looking for a better job, house, community, or even climate. Which do you prefer: staying in one place or moving in search of another place? Use reasons and specific examples to support your opinion.
Every place all over the world has its own luster that attracts any one to live on it. Some people don’t prefer to change their hometown, because it’s the place where they lived their childhood. With respect to me trying new places is like an adventures that brings me a lot of benefits in different ranges, so I have a chance to move from one city to another, I will consume it without any hesitation.
First of all, moving from one place to another can bring many advantages to the person. Sometimes the place where you lived cannot achieve what you want, due to the differences of the development and technology from one place to another. Job is the most common example, every person needs to find a great job that suit with his or her qualification and education with a good salary that allow him or her to live a dignify life. Since some towns have variable companies with different competences that open a wide chance to many person to own an excellent works.
Second, living a new adventure is a great thing that happened to the person if he or she can use it in a good way. Making a tour around world and transforming from one place to another is the best way to own new background of different cities. In addition, I think building a new relationship with people of different language and culture is the best thing that happened to me. For example, I moved from my home town more than one time, and in every time I knew a lot of person that helped me to discover where I lived and they were and still the best friends to me.
Finally, every city distinguishes from other one by its beautiful places that charm the eyes and its climate. No one can live in cold weather all over the year and even in the hot one. This reason can be the basic one that makes the person to try knew place rather than another. With respect to me, in summer I went to Hawaii to enjoy my time with swimming. While in winter, my favorite town that I love it so much is London, to spend my Christmas day with my family.
To sum up, I am getting bored if I stayed in one place without seeing the beauty of another. Trying new thing in our life and enjoy it is an awesome things that made a meaning of your life.
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Sentence: Trying new thing in our life and enjoy it is an awesome things that made a meaning of your life.
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
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No. of Words: 417 350
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No. of Different Words: 202 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.519 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.173 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.269 2.4
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No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 36 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 24 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
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Sentence Length SD: 7.61 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.34 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.558 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.125 0.07
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